Copy Edit the World

What: Hello Kitty asian candy

Error: "Yummi taste!"

Fix: "Yummy taste!"

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Where: 100w Major Assignments

Error: "For this assignment, you can use any word that’s new to you…that you’ve found in a book, newspaper, magazine or web site."

Fix: " For this assignment, you can use any word that’s new to you…that you’ve found in a book, newspaper, magazine or Web site."

(does that count?? haha)

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Where: On the menu at Vietnamese restaurant, "Binh Minh"

Error: "A rice plate of grilled pork and asorted spring mix vegetables."

Fix: "A rice place of grilled pork and assorted spring mix vegetables."

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Where: Korean brand pearl facial cream.

Error: "Gives skin a fresh glow like natural."

Fix: "Gives skin a natural fresh glow."

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